Comments on: FMA Fanfic: Decade http://vesperity.org/blog/2008/09/30/fma-fanfic-decade/ My rants, raves, and occasionally my fanfiction Mon, 28 Jun 2010 05:58:54 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Anonymous http://vesperity.org/blog/2008/09/30/fma-fanfic-decade/comment-page-1/#comment-631 Anonymous Tue, 07 Oct 2008 19:32:21 +0000 http://vesperity.org/blog/?p=215#comment-631 Oh it was masterfully done and you gave me pleasure. EP Oh it was masterfully done and you gave me pleasure.

EP

]]> By: Orion117 http://vesperity.org/blog/2008/09/30/fma-fanfic-decade/comment-page-1/#comment-626 Orion117 Tue, 07 Oct 2008 09:39:25 +0000 http://vesperity.org/blog/?p=215#comment-626 Oops! Forgot my LJ address. Oops! Forgot my LJ address.

]]> By: Orion117 http://vesperity.org/blog/2008/09/30/fma-fanfic-decade/comment-page-1/#comment-625 Orion117 Tue, 07 Oct 2008 09:37:16 +0000 http://vesperity.org/blog/?p=215#comment-625 So well done, the way you gave us little glimpses of Gracia throughout. I wasn't expecting to see her at the very end (or is that the very beginning), but It really made the story into something special. You did a good job of writing the boys as younger each time we see them, Roy especially. I liked the bits of Ed we saw, too. Beautiful story—I'm not surprised you won a prize. So well done, the way you gave us little glimpses of Gracia throughout. I wasn’t expecting to see her at the very end (or is that the very beginning), but It really made the story into something special. You did a good job of writing the boys as younger each time we see them, Roy especially. I liked the bits of Ed we saw, too. Beautiful story—I’m not surprised you won a prize.

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